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:iconkawaiistarkirby:
One of my BEST pics yet!!!!! I love Kirby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you guys like it cuz i worked hard on this.
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Well, I couldn't help but notice that the other critiques for this picture don't really help you at all...not to say they're not nice, but I know that I like to get helpful feedback when possible, so I'll try to do that for you. And I'll apologize ahead of time in case I may say something too blunt or hurtful. I don't intend that.
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So, let's begin! I'm not sure if I am correct to assume this, but it seems you're still in the beginning stages of drawing?? But even then, this picture is still well done and shows lots of potential. You drew kirby and it is recognizable as kirby, so that's always good XD. For Originality, well, let's face it. Kirby is very iconic for riding on that star, and flying through the sky. So, this wasn't exactly a big stretch. Your technique I would say is very sketchy. I say this because of the coloring and whatnot. But you got the basics pretty well, and nothing is too dramatically out of place. It's not distracting from the piece, therefore easy to overlook. Now, I gave five stars on impact because obviously your intentions were met fully. So far, almost (if not every) comment has been directed at the cuteness of this piece. To get a nice, strong reaction like that deserves a nice, strong score to relate :). Finally vision. It's clear to see what you were going for. However, I felt as if there could have been more. There is a lot of clear space that could've been incorporated that could have enhanced the overall appeal.

Overall this piece is pretty decent, and I hope this helped you a bit. If not, oh well. And I hope that you'll improve well, and create many more adorable kirbys in the future!
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This... Is... Pure... AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!! I mean, real AWESOMENESS!!! :D It's so cool!

I gave this 4 stars for originality, because we've all seen Kirby before and I think that I've seen characters floating on rainbows, but that SO does not change the fact that it's EPIC!!!

I really wish I could draw like this *sigh*. You have a talent for drawing, my friend! :)

Question: Could you make it any more awesome? Answer: No.
I think that you have done great! It's got really good technique, and Kirby looks so CUTE!! :D

Five more words: Keep Up Your Awesome Work!!! :D
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:iconpeachgoodnessfan:
!Peachgoodnessfan Dec 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
♥Aww, it's so adorable!♥
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:iconkawaiistarkirby:
!KawaiiStarKirby Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you!
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:iconpeachgoodnessfan:
!Peachgoodnessfan Dec 3, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ur welcome
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!KawaiiStarKirby Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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Mood: Love ~Bubble66 Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Too cute :aww:
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!KawaiiStarKirby Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks!!!
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~Bubble66 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome!
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Mood: Joy ~CristianAC Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like Kirby ^^ Look this [link]
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!KawaiiStarKirby Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thats so epic, great job!
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Mood: Joy ~CristianAC Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ^^
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